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A Kiss once True by TheAceintOne A Kiss once True by TheAceintOne
Hello again

heres a rought outline of my Two OCs
Claire(or Nova) and Atlas

there is a very deep connection between these to Characters that I've added to my original story rescently and I hope to start getting out for all to enjoy.

anyhow this is just a rough and the final will be up full color when it is completed.

Hope you enjoy!!!!! :D
I think that this piece has a very strong composition! The absolute 100% most important part of any drawing is the foundation, so it's great that your base is so solid. I very much enjoy Claire's wispy wings, the posing, and the attention to detail in their clothes and the angle of Atlas's sword. My advice for improvement while this piece is still in progress is to perhaps find reference for Atlas's arm, and redraw it. To me, right now, it feels stiff and robotic because of the 90 degree angle, and the anatomy of his hand is a little shaky. Overall though, this is a very wonderful drawing, and I'm looking forward to the finished version!
What do you think?
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Submitted on
August 6, 2012
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